Title: The Day Hazards Spoilt My Day.
Age: 7- 8 year olds (Grade 3)
Purpose: to sensitize students about environmental
threats to the health and well-being of students, families, schools, and
communities (HFLE)
Justification: Many children are unaware
of the dangers surrounding them. A good way to sensitize them would be by using
a Narrative piece which catches their attention. At their age their attention
spans are short so using a piece that they are interested in is a good way to
bring the content across. It tells a story based on a real or imagined event. A
Narrative is found in all forms of human creativity and art, including speech, writing, songs,
that describes a sequence of
events.
I really did enjoy the tone and pace of your speech.Very detailed and interesting way to bring about hazards in a narrative piece. Oh how I felt I was in your class! Great job!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your piece Brittney. Your tone was excellent and I believe you are well on your way of becoming an excellent writing teacher.
ReplyDeleteVery Intriguing Post!
interesting way to enlighten students about hazards!I am certain that your intended audience will appreciate this piece and learn valuable lessons from it.
ReplyDeleteviews by: Ylet Jn.Baptiste
Well put together. This piece will definitely sensitize your students how environmental threats can contribute negatively to their health.I am sure your intended audience will love it as as I do.
ReplyDeleteNasha John
Interesting and informing. After engaging students in this piece they will be aware of some of the hazards they can encounter on a daily basis and ensure that they keep away from these hazardous situations. Well done Brittney
ReplyDeleteAbigail
Excellent Britney! Your students can definitely relate to this piece. This is a great way of sensitizing your students about hazards.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness Brittney, your students will have the time of their lives in your classroom. Very relatable story with a bit of exaggeration. Nicely done. I like it.
ReplyDeleteWell done Brittney! I guess HFLE paid off greatly. Keep up the good work. Michele Clercent
ReplyDeleteExcellent job! I am sure the students will learn the lesson conveyed in this video.
ReplyDeleteVery nice Brittney. I liked how it showed different examples of harzards. You tone of voice was very welcoming and child friendly. Infact a cousin of mine who listened to it said that you sounded exactly like a teacher. lol. And thats what you are well done Brittney
ReplyDeleteRon Narcisse
Thank you Brittney. You have come to the end of this journey but will commence another soon. An introduction to your piece of writing would be so helpful.
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