Alright Puss Puss! Very interesting poem and I believe that the students will enjoy this. The rhyme pattern and rhythm was a plus for this piece. Good work Duayne!
This is so comical! Thanks for the laughter this morning. I want to commend you on your beautiful creation. The sound and graphics added some flair to this text. I can already envision the pupils having fun with this one whilst learning rhyming words.
This is a very interesting piece that the students will be extremely happy and interested to recite. This is a great piece to get the students attention and to increase their repertoire of rhyming words.
Superb job! Clear and unique introduction. Excellent use of pauses, intonation and speech. Also, I find that it is indeed grade appropriate in graphics and duration. The selection of the poem is also suitable for the grade level. Great effort!
Wonderful piece Duayne! This is very appropriate for the grade level and the music in the background is soothing. It allows you to feel and relate to the poem.
Good piece Duayne. Really captivating, I am already thinking of using this piece with my grade threes for practical teaching. Nice play on words. Abigail
Wow Duayne! Only you could write a piece like this. This was therapy for my soul. I only hope this poem was meant to be taken literally. Rhyming patterns were on point. Good job!
Puss puss mi chat la lol. Very nice dwuayne. I like the rhythm to this poem. It was indeed comical. Reminded me of Tom and Jerry. Excellent job in putting this puss i mean piece together bro *thumbs up* I liked the cat sound in the background as well Ron Narcisse
Very entertaining Duayne. I laughed until the very end. The rhythm was on point along with the images. This poem had my daughter dancing along to the rhythm and repeating puss, puss. Very nice
Wonderful Duayne! I want to encourage you to share this poem with your students when you go out on practical teaching. This is poetry, so you could have added some drumming and voice modulation to enhance the performance.
Oh yes! It was definitely a wonderful poem . Looking forward to your descriptive piece.
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Alright Puss Puss!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting poem and I believe that the students will enjoy this. The rhyme pattern and rhythm was a plus for this piece. Good work Duayne!
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DeleteThis is so comical! Thanks for the laughter this morning. I want to commend you on your beautiful creation. The sound and graphics added some flair to this text. I can already envision the pupils having fun with this one whilst learning rhyming words.
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What an amusing poem Duayne. Well crafted. Bravo. The students will certainly enjoy this poem.
ReplyDeleteThis was surely worth the listen. I can foresee the students in grade three reciting this poem ever so often. Get work!
ReplyDeleteShaquille Aldonza
This is a very interesting piece that the students will be extremely happy and interested to recite. This is a great piece to get the students attention and to increase their repertoire of rhyming words.
ReplyDeleteBrittney Duplessis
Superb job! Clear and unique introduction. Excellent use of pauses, intonation and speech. Also, I find that it is indeed grade appropriate in graphics and duration. The selection of the poem is also suitable for the grade level. Great effort!
ReplyDeleteRyan Bicar.
Wonderful piece Duayne! This is very appropriate for the grade level and the music in the background is soothing. It allows you to feel and relate to the poem.
ReplyDeleteVery Good!
Good piece Duayne. Really captivating, I am already thinking of using this piece with my grade threes for practical teaching. Nice play on words.
ReplyDeleteAbigail
I am also thinking of using this piece on practical teaching, of course with Duayne's permission. This was really amusing and nicely written.
DeleteWow Duayne! Only you could write a piece like this. This was therapy for my soul. I only hope this poem was meant to be taken literally. Rhyming patterns were on point. Good job!
ReplyDeleteThis will no doubt draw laughter from the students. The musical rhythm and the cat crying adds to your presentation. Good job!
ReplyDeleteMichele Clercent
Good Job Duayne! I am sure that the students of grade three will enjoy this poem.
ReplyDeletePuss puss mi chat la lol. Very nice dwuayne. I like the rhythm to this poem. It was indeed comical. Reminded me of Tom and Jerry. Excellent job in putting this puss i mean piece together bro *thumbs up*
ReplyDeleteI liked the cat sound in the background as well
Ron Narcisse
Very entertaining Duayne. I laughed until the very end. The rhythm was on point along with the images. This poem had my daughter dancing along to the rhythm and repeating puss, puss.
ReplyDeleteVery nice
Soria Cornibert
Wonderful Duayne! I want to encourage you to share this poem with your students when you go out on practical teaching.
ReplyDeleteThis is poetry, so you could have added some drumming and voice modulation to enhance the performance.